I recorded the song "A Ride To Dillons," to the tune of "God Bless Texas," and it's about a parasitic neighbor who kept nagging me for rides to the supermarket when I needed to sleep. Would you please critique the lyrics and recording?

I recorded the song "A Ride To Dillons," to the tune of "God Bless Texas," and it's about a parasitic neighbor who kept nagging me for rides to the supermarket when I needed to sleep. Would you please critique the lyrics and recording?Habits & Lifestyle (self.TooAfraidToAsk)

submitted 3 years ago by TSoWAY

He had no Income except for food benefits, and had a smoking and drinking problem.

Recording made last night: https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/d35a2

No, it wasn't made in a studio. I was laying in bed when I made the recording with this phone, a tablet and a Bluetooth speaker.

I look forward to your critique. Thanks.

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