"Come To The Soulwinner's Mission Church," to the tune of the J-Pop hit "BEST FRIEND. If we put this on local radio, will we see an increase in our church's attendance? Anyways, your thoughts on my church's new theme song? (r/IndieMusicFeedback)

 

Singer Songwriter"Come To The Soulwinner's Mission Church," to the tune of the J-Pop hit "BEST FRIEND. If we put this on local radio, will we see an increase in our church's attendance? Anyways, your thoughts on my church's new theme song? (soundcloud.app.goo.gl)

submitted 3 years ago by TSoWAY

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[–]ethanGuitar 2 points 3 years ago 

this is cool, I think you should work on projecting your voice and don't be afraid to use your throat voice, I noticed when the melody moves up you go into falsetto a lot which sounds a little amateurish.

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[–][deleted] 2 points 3 years ago 

Personally I think this is fantastic, it is enjoyable the whole way through. I could only imagine that if it was on the radio that it would definitely result in an increase of attendance so that would be worth while doing. I think the only thing to improve would be to record real backing tracks instead of using a karaoke instrumental and you’d be more likely to get it on the radio but I also wouldn’t be surprised if that was not necessary. Keep doing stuff like this, it’s great!

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[–]IMF_Redditeer 1 point 3 years ago 

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[–]Manzobeat 1 point 3 years ago 

Nice 👍

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[–]real_g4477 1 point 3 years ago 

fire bro

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