Person I most admire (Retro Personal Entry)

Dear Journal,
There are several people I most admire.
I might not be able to list all of them, but
here goes! There's a short junior who's
all my sister's height but twice my sister's
age. I like short girls pretty much, but I hope
she meets juniors instead of 4th graders
if she moves to a new place. There
are several 7th graders which I think
are the cutest chics in the county (or
even in the state!) Their legs are made
of gold and are very thin. I wish
I'd think that in the 7th grade!
And finally, there's J.J. Neubauer.
I liked her a little in the 3rd grade, but
it was only the 3rd grade. She moved
to Salina, and I like her a lot more
now! I just hope she moves back here
and goes to high school so I can like
her again! I liked her the most
because she was a chic and wore
those cute tights!

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Telling About Myself (Retro Personal Entry)

Dear Journal,
Hi, my name is Christian (surname). I'm 14 and
a new years baby. My hobbies are: wrestling,
video game playing, and rollerblading.
I mostly like playing strategy and flight
simulators, racing, and car combat. I also
occasionally play 1st person shooters.
The playing I love the most is playing
online games with other people online.
I have bodyguards which will promise me a good
time in highschool and not let any one ruin it for
me. My past was bad enough and I don't need
any more trouble to ruin the present and
future. How we get along with kids
and parents determines my grades most
of the time. Bad attitudes and remarks from
classmates ruins my concentration on work
and keeps me preoccupied about it. They should
know about it and also know that it will happen
to them, too. I'm hoping to go to KSU and
became a video game programmer.


Teacher Comment: You're off to a good
start.